kinda sad prose style thinggy

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Damia (I'm oppinionated deal with it.) on Sunday, 13-Jan-2008 11:49:10

In time I thought I'd be ok
The anger fill my heart
In time I thought i could hate or even forget
neither can I do
when I see you around just sadness and what I lost
and I don't even know completely how
an emtyness I feel when I think on memories past
from the time I was a child and said you meant allot to me
a little fuss between me and another
something done I don't know
and now your anger is so strong
and my sadness is like a tide
The trust the laughter
the debates the learning
I wanted to model myself after you
but now you hate my name
kind I try to be but you turn away
teers I cried before you helped take away
now teers I cry over you
all you do is turn away
i miss and love you beautiful lady
friend and almost mother
forgiveness I know I'll never get instead again is just me broken again teers rolling down my face
i end this now to say goodbye
to say I'd try
I'll miss you alway

Post 2 by Emerald-Hourglass (Account disabled) on Sunday, 13-Jan-2008 12:09:17

awww candy. i like it.

Post 3 by Gracesong (Zone BBS is my Life) on Monday, 14-Jan-2008 10:09:21

i liked, too. All to happen people refuse to forgive others and tear apart a what would otherwise be great relationship.